Engelsk Informal-Letter, nogle som kan rette?
Hej, jeg har lavet en engelsk opgave, som skulle være valgfrit.
Jeg har derfor valgt at skrive et "Informal Letter" til min fætter fra Montenegro :-))
Nogle som kan rette denne stil? :-))
Tusind tak på forhånd.
INFORMAL LETTER
Hey Milisav
In a long time, I have thought about to write a letter, because I really miss all of you, how do it goes in school, is it hard?
I have begun in a new school, ”********”. It is hard but also fun and interesting.
How do grandfatherr and uncle have it? There don’t go one day where I don’t think about you and the rest of the family. I can’t wait to next summer, to come down, and have it fun and play football and all kind of stuff.
How does it go on the farm, are there much to do? We have it good, I work in a big market and earn my own money, and it is really funny, mot not like your job. Do you still fish, and do you catch something? I can really not wait to come down and catch some fish.
I had a really wired dream yesterday. It was about me and you, we was on a ship, on the big ocean. The water was almost transparent; we could see all the fish in the water. It was a really sunshine day. We where fishing, but didn’t catch anything, it was a long day but suddenly the weather turn and it began to rain and thunderstorm.
The waves were huge, it makes the ship moving side by side, I was scared and terrified, and you screamed that you want to try one more time.
And you did you throw the line in the water and only after few second a giant fish jumped out of the water, and grab the madding, you hold the fishing rod, but the fish was to strong it pull so hard that you fall down in the water.
And then I wake up, I was totally sweaty and terrified, but enough of that I hope you all have it good and I repeats myself. I can’t wait to come again, my father has talking something about that we maybe will come to winter but we will se.
Jeg har derfor valgt at skrive et "Informal Letter" til min fætter fra Montenegro :-))
Nogle som kan rette denne stil? :-))
Tusind tak på forhånd.
INFORMAL LETTER
Hey Milisav
In a long time, I have thought about to write a letter, because I really miss all of you, how do it goes in school, is it hard?
I have begun in a new school, ”********”. It is hard but also fun and interesting.
How do grandfatherr and uncle have it? There don’t go one day where I don’t think about you and the rest of the family. I can’t wait to next summer, to come down, and have it fun and play football and all kind of stuff.
How does it go on the farm, are there much to do? We have it good, I work in a big market and earn my own money, and it is really funny, mot not like your job. Do you still fish, and do you catch something? I can really not wait to come down and catch some fish.
I had a really wired dream yesterday. It was about me and you, we was on a ship, on the big ocean. The water was almost transparent; we could see all the fish in the water. It was a really sunshine day. We where fishing, but didn’t catch anything, it was a long day but suddenly the weather turn and it began to rain and thunderstorm.
The waves were huge, it makes the ship moving side by side, I was scared and terrified, and you screamed that you want to try one more time.
And you did you throw the line in the water and only after few second a giant fish jumped out of the water, and grab the madding, you hold the fishing rod, but the fish was to strong it pull so hard that you fall down in the water.
And then I wake up, I was totally sweaty and terrified, but enough of that I hope you all have it good and I repeats myself. I can’t wait to come again, my father has talking something about that we maybe will come to winter but we will se.