Et kærlighedsdigt

Har lavet et digt om kærlighed til min kæreste og ville lige høre om der var nogle der gad at læse det igennem, og sige deres mening? Og så selvfølgelig sige til, hvis der er nogle fejl.
Enjoy:
I love you
I love everything about you
I love your hair, your clothes, your smell, your face
I never wanted to hurt you
And I apologize a million times
It has never been my attention because I love you and I need you
I can’t make my way trough the day without you
I can’t without your smile and your love
Every day without you I’m way down and miss you
As I never have missed anyone before
Every day with you I’m way up in the sky and happy
As I never have been before
You make me so happy and in love
As I never have been before
My heart truly belongs to you
You’re the most important person in my life
I love kissing you
Love holding in hands with you
Love to run my fingers through your hair
Love looking into your eyes as my love to you continues growing
Hours with you feels like minutes for me
This wasn’t love at first sight
But I don’t care
‘Cause what we’ve build together in about a year
Is so much more that you couldn’t even compare
I never want this to end ‘cause you’re my everything
And I couldn’t imagine me with anyone else but you
I can’t even describe
How much I love you
How much I care about you
How much you mean to me
I can’t even describe your beauty on the inside and outside

I’ll never forget you
Never forget your kisses
Never forget your voice
Never forget your smell
Never forget your eyes
Never forget your beauty
I’ll never forget your love
And sweetheart I promise
I’ll always love you no matter what
‘Cause you’ve meant so much to me
I love you
I’ll always love you

til max 10 linier...du går i selvsving!

Det er da et ok digt. Men skal jeg være kritisk, så er det nok lidt for langt. Lav max 4 vers af max 5 linier, så er det bare helt fjong. Som det er nu med forskellige vers af forskellige længder ser det lidt rodet ud. Men ellers ros herfra.

som en forelsket person lyder.
Herligt :o)