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ENGELSK OVERSÆTTELSE - RETTELSE

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er dér én derude som vil kigge denne tekst (min engelsk oversættelse) igennem for grammatikfejl?
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Even while he was just a child, Mozart played fantastically good. Especially his father, who was a musician by himself, soon saw the son’s opportunities, and together they performed in many of Europe’s major cities. Very early, the little Mozart began composing the most wonderful melodies, and before long he actually wrote some utmost complicated music for more than one instrument as well. Later, when he as a young man left for Vienna, he also began to write opera, which were one of the recreations people loved dearly.
As often seen with child prodigies, it was however difficult for him to adapt socially. Even after he had become a well-known and far-famed composer, he was really looked down on by Vienna’s upper-class.
Many saw him as extremely childish and vulgar, and some people thought that his music sounded childish and vulgar as well, and they did not behave very friendly towards him. Fortunately, all this had no influence on his music. In the following years he wrote hundreds of wonderful melodious pieces of music.
In despite of his huge fame, Mozart died in poverty, only thirty-five-years-old
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I would do it like this

Even as a child Mozart played fantastic. Even his father, who himself was a musician , soon saw his sons possibilities, and together they performed in many major cities in Europe.
The young Mozart began composing (the most) wonderful melodies very early, and soon he actually wrote some very complicated music for more than one instrument.
Later, as a young man, he left for Vienna where he started to write operaes, wich were one of the things people loved at that time.
As often with child geniuses, it was difficult for him to adapt socially.
Even after he had become well known and famous, Viennas upperclass looked down at him.
Many saw him as extremely childish and vulgar, and many thougt his music was like that, and they didnt treat him friendly.
By fortune, none of this made any influence on his music. In the following years he composed hundreds of wonderful melodiuos pieces of music.
In spite of his huge fame, Mozart died in powerty, only 35 years old.
Med forbehold for tyrkfjel og lignende, og sikkert ikke engelsk som en englænder ville benytte....
Jeg har sat () om the most, da jeg ikke er sikker på at en englænder ville bruge det udtryk.
Viennaa upperclass looked down at him, er jeg helelr ikke sikker på er det korrekte udtryk, men jeg kan ikke komme på det rette.
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Correction

Even when he was just a child, Mozart played fantastically well. Especially his father, who was a musician as well, soon saw the son's opportunities and together they performed in many of Europe's major cities. Very early, the little Mozart began composing the most wonderful melodies and before long he actually wrote some of the utmost complicated music on more than one instrument as well. Later, when he as a young man left for Vienna, he also began to write opera, which was one of the recreations people loved dearly.
However, as often seen with child prodigies, it was difficult for him to adapt socially. Even after he had become a well-known and far-famed? composer, he was really looked down upon by Vienna's upper-class.
Many saw him as extremely childish and vulgar, and some people thought that his music sounded childish and vulgar as well and they did not behave very friendly towards him. Fortunately, all this had no influence on his music. In the following years he wrote hundreds of wonderful melodious pieces of music.
Despite his huge fame, Mozart died in poverty, only thirty-five years old.
This is how I would write it🙂
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Here goes.............

Even as a child Mozart played fantastically well.His father who was a musician himself.soon saw his son`s opportunities and together they performed in many of Europe`s major cities.Very early on, ( the ) little Mozart began composing the most wonderful music and before long he wrote some utmost complicated pieces ( music )for more than one instrument.Later on,when as a young man he left for Vienna,he began to write opera what was one of the kind of music people loved very much.As often are with child prodigies it was difficult for Mozart to fit in socially.Even after he became a famous composer,he was looked down upon by Viennas upper-classes.Many saw Mozart as extremely childish and vulgar.Some people thought his music sounded childish and vulgar as well and they did not behave freindly towards him. Fortunately this had no effect (influence ) on his music ( composing )In the following years he did write some wonderfull melodious pieces of music.In despite of his huge fame Mozart died in poverty only thirtyfive years old.
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