Hjælp til engelsk ansøgning
Hej alle sammen.. jeg er 17 år og er igang med at ansøge på et "college" I udlandet.
Men jeg skal skrie en lille stil om mig selv. Og det er jeg super dårlig til..
Hvad syntes i at jeg skal rette/skrive i den. Alle de colleges i hele verden forkusere meget på en global verden så det skal stå lidt om det. Jeg var udvekslings students sidste år men det med Grammatik gik ikke godt ! Så please hjælp mig!!
Her er min stil :
I am 17 years old and I live with my mom, step dad, sister and my step brother. I moved from Copenhagen to Jutland in June. I am attending “*****”. I am studying English on an A level, Spanish A and media B and I am a freshman (1.G).
Last year I was an exchange student for 11 months and I lived with the same family the whole time I was there. I spend the most of my time with the other exchange students from South America, Asia and Europe. It was really exciting to see pictures and to hear about their countries and traditions, and I have contact with them. It was a year that really changed me and I wish I could turn time back.
I heard about UWC when I was at an AFS weekend and I thought it sounded really intriguing. I would like to study in another country first of all because I know it will be a really big experience and second of all because I want to learn more about other cultures.
If I did get the chance to attend a United World College I contribute with telling other people from around the world about Denmark and show them how we are and that we aren’t that different from each other. I would hope to learn more about different cultures and especially try to live with “the whole world” right next to me.
I would really love to study in another country, because other cultures really fascinates me, and instead of going to school here in Denmark, it would be amazing to live near everybody and to do almost everything together!
Tak fordi i gad at læse den.. Og forhåbentlig svare :D
Men jeg skal skrie en lille stil om mig selv. Og det er jeg super dårlig til..
Hvad syntes i at jeg skal rette/skrive i den. Alle de colleges i hele verden forkusere meget på en global verden så det skal stå lidt om det. Jeg var udvekslings students sidste år men det med Grammatik gik ikke godt ! Så please hjælp mig!!
Her er min stil :
I am 17 years old and I live with my mom, step dad, sister and my step brother. I moved from Copenhagen to Jutland in June. I am attending “*****”. I am studying English on an A level, Spanish A and media B and I am a freshman (1.G).
Last year I was an exchange student for 11 months and I lived with the same family the whole time I was there. I spend the most of my time with the other exchange students from South America, Asia and Europe. It was really exciting to see pictures and to hear about their countries and traditions, and I have contact with them. It was a year that really changed me and I wish I could turn time back.
I heard about UWC when I was at an AFS weekend and I thought it sounded really intriguing. I would like to study in another country first of all because I know it will be a really big experience and second of all because I want to learn more about other cultures.
If I did get the chance to attend a United World College I contribute with telling other people from around the world about Denmark and show them how we are and that we aren’t that different from each other. I would hope to learn more about different cultures and especially try to live with “the whole world” right next to me.
I would really love to study in another country, because other cultures really fascinates me, and instead of going to school here in Denmark, it would be amazing to live near everybody and to do almost everything together!
Tak fordi i gad at læse den.. Og forhåbentlig svare :D